Task:

• Analyze the fable below to improve its flow, structure, and clarity.

• Suggest changes to enhance readability and make it more engaging for modern audiences.

• Add two relevant morals that align with the story's message, while introducing fresh insights for today’s context.

Instructions:

• Improve Flow and Structure:

  • Refine the narrative to ensure it’s clear and easy to follow.

  • Adjust any awkward phrasing or logical inconsistencies.

• Add New Morals:Identify two new morals that complement the original message and provide modern insights.

• Goal: Create a more compelling, clear fable with a smooth flow and impactful lessons.